quite good
the colours were all similar which helped i think, some animation could look better quality overall good.
quite good
the colours were all similar which helped i think, some animation could look better quality overall good.
thanks for the review and that was the colour scheme i was going.
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Nice work dude. Shud have made longer... My Second toon was really short because u get sick of looking at the same things evertime... when this happens DONT SUBMIT! make something else for a while, screw round with sound effects or do something else cos yeah when all the reviews say make it longer ur like well doesnt anyone have anything better to say? so yeah very cool make a whole toon the same quality as the zombie hit in the face and add some music... the shadow guys an idiot there was a play button he musnt have had flash 8.
I sat on this for a while and did start some other projects and worked on editing sound, but I had already put in too much time on this animation. Next one'll be longer.
real nice
Awesome work dude a tad long in some bits but otherwise pure gold. going straight to favs
Repetitive is the word lol. I get that alot. But I'm glad you faved it. thanks for the review. Sorry for the late response, I'm swamped =_=
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hey i havent watched but read ur thing about audio lagging... did u set sounds as events or streams in properties? cos changing that normally fixes it
This is a place for reviewing animations,if you have something to say to me then I'd rather appricate it if you e-mailed it or something rather. Thanks though, I'll try your options.
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This is really nice graphics but I'm thinking you will need to speed it up alot. Even if it doesn't seem to have much length people will appreciate it more if its not like we're waiting for the character to make it across the screen. If you're going to do the whole thing like this 'side on' view i'm thinking you should do many layers of action. eg. small zombies or whatever walking silently in the shadows. It would just give it some depth... looking forward to the final :)
Great suggestion, I thought my scenes were fairly static also, I could do with developing the characters from the legs down too and allow an epic approach for swarms of zombies or whatever.
I'm still unsure about adding tyrants, lickers, hunters or even those farmer dudes off the latest one.
Anyway, I'll give that a try! Thanks for the ideas, they help! :)
I choose protection
Hey I'm protecting this because it has potential... If u DID do the animation its quite good. However if u want it to go really well do this....
-Better storyline, it was okay but needed more clarity.
-Subtitles, i'm sorry did anyone get what they said?
-Full frame, it was very small considering the size of the window.
-Quality, improve quality, i don't do these movies so i wouldn't know how but if u cleaned this all up it would be appealing.
-Sound, Music, ambience? It has constant cuts between lines.
Otherwise good and I can imagine the amount of time it took to animate so I say keep it up, make it more proffessional and it could make top 50.
all good points, i probably shouldn't have made a movie based on my ramblings.
GENIUS!!!
Good lord wat an amazing child we have here... I just couldnt bring myself to close the window The sheer captivation, the metaphorical references to everything so perfect and beautiful And the fear that all human kind instinctively feels that we exaserpated(rite word??) all that we need to further exist.. I felt it was as if jesus spoke through our primitive earthly tongue and told us all that if we love each other and wine... maybe squirrels too... we may have a fleeting chance to further survive, perhaps even evolve into something more wholesome. something more devine. I feel proud that someone of such eternal brilliance has explained the meaning of life so that we may despite being ignorant to the levels of insanity, continue to create the endless circle of birth life and death and the continuation of boundless happiness.
Amen to that, and nuts to squirrels!
Gangsta Chap creating.
Age 37, Male
Future animator?
Just finished BBC
Brisbane Qld Aus
Joined on 12/11/04